“The owner of the shoe store, Yehudi O’Dell, didn’t bat an eyelash when he forced the velveteen slipper over the fat lady’s foot. He’d performed the same service almost a thousand times every month. However, this was the first time that a customer died, with him squatting on a stubby stool and holding a pudgy foot in his hand. And hell if he hadn’t asked “Is that too tight madam?”
The above is a paragraph in one of my works in progress. Where do you think the story is headed, or better yet, where would you like the story line to take you?
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